Gosh, this was super cute and so much fun!!
I loved the concept of the MC downloading an app to help her get out of her home after being there too long. And doing so by walking was such a great idea!! I could relate a lot to her because I'm a homebody myself but I also love taking walks and checking out cool places. The fact that she also struggled, at first, ringed so close to home... this game felt very special to me in that way.
The bachelors are super cute, I honestly liked all of them but I have to say I have a soft spot for Henry & Valen. Stephan and Timothy look very sweet too and I'm looking forward to their routes as well!!
The art and backgrounds were all super cute, I really loved how their eyes would blink at times (and the symbols inside them, like the flowers and hearts!) and even the effect of their mouths moving at certain points! The character customization for the MC was lovely as well, all the outfits are so cute!!
Now, when it comes to feedback, I hope it's okay to point out a few things 🙏 I understand that this game was made in a month for Nanoreno, but I honestly believe fixing these things would make the experience even better when it's already a really cute game.
Alrighty, here goes!
1) The game has quite a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes. It's not to the point where it can't be enjoyed at all but it can sometimes be a little distracting. I think this could be solved easily with a proofreader that can be of help 💪
2) Certain parts of the UI don't mesh very well. The thing that looked most jarring to me were the colors chosen for the namebox and the textbox. Since the namebox has a reddish hue, some colors chosen for the character names didn't look aesthetically pleasing (and Quincy's was barely readable). The purple color for the textbox looked a bit off with the red tones in the UI as well. This is my personal opinion, but I think this could be easily solved by making all the characters' names white and the dialogue text black 💪 The other thing is that the namebox looks a little pixelated on the white parts.
Overall, the game was really cute and made me smile a lot. Thank you so much for making this story! Looking forward to the other characters routes and your other games!! ❤️
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Thank you so much for your lovely and detailed feedback! It means a lot coming from you! ❤️
We're so happy to hear that you enjoyed the game and could relate to the MC's journey. 🥺 Henry and Valentim are such babies!! ToT
No problem, since the game isn't fully released we can apply the feedback to the update~
We totally get it, we have plans to hire a proofreader to take a look at our games. 😊
Hmm I see! We will also consider your UI suggestions to increase visual consistency and readability. Thank you for the advise! ❤️🥰
aawn and once more thank you for taking a time to write such sweet comment!! <33