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Right a potential permanent lock was one thing I was afraid of as I ran out of Fire sources at one point.

Overall the writing was stronger than the marks I have for story, in other words the dialog and humor were pretty strong.

I get that, the actual story didn't come together as well as it was written. Honestly I find that I can write really well but I'm just terrible at actually making stories that come together and make remote sense. Hope I can work on this as I shift focus to bigger games.