Just letting you know there is a lot of tense shifting in the writing. Once it was even within the same sentence.
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Yeah I've been finding it quite hard especially since I was deliberating whether to write in past or present tense especially since it's in 2nd person. I'll go back and edit it when I upload for Chapter 2 but if you know any AI tense checkers or anything I would be very thankful. Thanks for letting me know :)