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Feedback to the game:

Length: Pretty short between 2-3 hours with the deluxe version

Story:
Story itself without spoiling to much is pretty interesting and as someone else already mentioned gives vibes of zero escape series which made me actually buy it after the demo.

There is a couple typos in the texts but nothing that hinders understanding of the story.
Unfortunatly it's not all positive. The story in it's core is understandable but unfortunatly feels a bit too short.
As soon the game establishes it's rules of surviving and having to maybe forgo your morals, it just stops there and then it just skips to the overarching story of the "invaders" which unfortunatly never completely finishes itself.

You get a glimpse into it and then the game is over :(.
While the deluxe update of the game goes a bit deeper into the setting and what is happening it still doesn't explain everything and leaves alot of open questions. (Maybe to continue having updates for the game with future patches?)

OST: Probably one of the core postive points of the game. It adds alot of OST to the different endings that are fitting with their lyrics.

Audio VA: It does have a bit of voice acting in it (not sure if it as part of the deluxe part of the game or not) But it was nice.

NSFW Content: ... It's not alot so if you're about to buy it because you're interested in that aspect I'd have to disappoint you - most of it is even posted in the previews on the site already.

All in all I'd have quite a few suggestions to make the VN maybe more appealling.

- during different NG+ maybe make the second challenge be a different girl? (Maybe make it dependend on a choice of player beforehand)

- Add more challenges in general, with different outcomes? (More NSFW content...?)

- considering the above mentions -> Why not have an outcome that is the moral ending?

- Definitly elaborate more of what the System is and what exactly is going on. (I understand it's to filter (which makes the coin toss at the start questionable...unless it's just create more... you know if you played it.) , but why? and how did it come to it? there are so many questions unanswered?? not listing everything to not spoil everything)

 If you'd ask me if I would recommend the game I'd have to say, to support the dev sure buy the OST, but the game itself just feels unfinished and more of a tutorial or an intro of a VN. 

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I really love your suggestions and I hope the dev will listen to them 

and implement them in the next update of this game

I also agree that there many questions are still not answered in the 

current update of the game but I also think you can figure the 

answer for many of the questions by simply thinking about and

 analyzing what the game is trying to say but yeah OST is fire

 probably the best OST I found on itch so far

By the way the system plot thing simply reminds me of solo leveling system thing maybe that's what the dev is trying to say?