Excellent work on this! It accomplishes the difficult job of reading more easily than the original while not adding much in the way of interpreting the vague or confusing parts.
On the format, I was first sad to see the square pages of the PDF, since that would make printing at home weird or tedious, but I actually ending up leaving the huge top and bottom margins. Leaves tons of room for my notes, scribbles, and doodles.
Thanks for the wonderful book!