Hey Flor, thanks for the feedback! I'm glad the story demo was engaging and made you excited for the rest of the story!
Haha, that's a good framing of Comaetho: she's a person who did everything for her city, but maybe she is longing for something for herself... What would happen if it were taken away from her!
And thanks for the art, I'm glad I have improved (the things training does you hehe)!