Thank you very much for the feedback, Leon!
I can definitely see where you're coming from for the qualms with Jen, but aside from her perhaps being a bit too open about herself, she does lack the social aptitude to keep it all in. I understand why it can be a bit questionably written in this way, but I hope that through seeing the rest of the story, you'll understand a bit more. If I do feel like I can soften it a bit though, it is a change I will definitely make!
As for her design, you actually are onto something that her design doesn't quite fit with the rest of the cast. She doesn't really have that business feel to her, but again, I hope you'll see why I went with something a little out of place in the context of the full game.
Regardless, thank you so much for playing! And I really appreciate all the feedback! I want to do everything I can to improve KC into something far beyond what I imagine it, and I hope you'll stick around for the ride. :) People like you who enjoy and give feedback are really the best!