Hello. Oh boy this was a ride. For the ones in this game jam I played this one twice but it wasnt because of a good reason.
Spoilers.
First things first. The second that your in the game you could see the combo between the art from rpg makers tiles, Custom pixel art and normal art. That were alot of styles in one but thats just a little nit pick from me. The story was kinda blend and random. the characters were kinda one sided. That is something that can happen in a smaller game but it was very hard to not see that. Do have to say that there was one character named Samart and I kinda liked his dialogue. Talking about dialogue some of it was very misplaced and wrong in some different ways. Now I did see a translation option and thats good and I also think the reason way the dialogue is a little odd. My games have spelling errors and Im not englisch. So if the creator is not englisch that I can over look that for sure. The ending was a bit wierd. It could be because it was both of the bad endings but even if there bad ending there still endings. Lets just say they were a little out of no where.
Final thought about this is I can see that you want tho make a good game. I really do but that doesnt make the game better. All you have to do is keep at it and those mistakes will fade away pretty much. Hope it helps and good luck with your future projects.