A very intriguing and compelling reading. Every character had their own voice and I enjoyed learning about Reimu’s viewpoint. The presentation was pretty nice too (backgrounds, colors, choice of font). The music was good but I admit I also found it a bit distracting. I agree that the use of silence would have been a good choice. You could also consider using ambient sound effects. Picture the falling rain, or a ticking clock when you wake up in the SDM. The ending **SPOILERS** makes we wish ZUN would age the characters as the years pass. It's something I've thought about as well. ** END SPOILERS**
I’m happy that you made a game AngryCow! I hope to see more games from you and the team in future jams.