just finished the demo rlly enjoyed it! the art is pretty, love the sprites + the bg style is v cute. the bg music is also nice and all the VA lines i've heard so far sound lovely.
v small side note, and i do hope i'm not overstepping/being rude!! idk if these things have been/will be fixed in the behind-the-scenes process since this is just the demo but i j wanted to mention i've spotted a few small typos?
one of the lines says "a stranger's voice cut through the haze but were lost in the fog", i think it's meant to be "was" instead of "were". another line is the following section "Sickening amount ... blood loss spoke an unsurvivable injury." I think it's meant to be "a sickening amount" and "blood loss spoke of an...". there's also "I ... too many drinks my that head throbbed". there's also a line in madison's section where MC says "I didn't have to scare me like that!" instead of "you".
once again these r just little details i noticed and 100% not remotely a criticism or anything<333 v excited to see where this game goes!!