Hi! the writing is very good, I was invested on the story it's a shame that it is so short. I liked the images you chose to use as well. I have some feedback tho:
- I felt a bit lost since there was no indication of what I could interact on the scenes, apart from taking a sip form the drink. Also I feel the story can be enhanced by having other spots to click with a few more context and interactions.
- I am sorry but I have to be honest with this one, the jumpscare of the lady inside the coffin was very cheap lol. The image by itself isn't scary and the stress was induced by the loud scream only. Please don't take this as an offense, I really believe you can turn this prototype in a very cool game bc u clearly are talented.
I hope to see more development on this in the future!
thank you!