hi!
i started playing your game this moring and i have to say this is extremely nicely built!
the scenes are easy to understand and dialogues are simple and nicely written!
i do have little suggestions to make to upgrade this game:
-change colors of the clients text when its a recipe, and use three distinct colors when orders are asked to help the player read the order faster
-use a list style order (i saw that sometimes when the name of the recipe is too long, it tends to look hard to read), it arranges nicely the order and makes it look cleaner to the eye!
-maybe add a page of recipes for basic ingredients such as meatballs, hashbrown, and other forms of ingredients for players that are non-english, as culture may differ the ways of cooking and it can be really time-taking to find the right way to cook an ingredient.
this is all for the reccomendations!
i also noticed a problem when i make the full breakfast meal as i cant put the sausage with the vegeterian breakfast, it just wont work.. please tell me if i did anything wrong while doing this meal!
your game is great i love it!!
have a nice day :-)