I really enjoyed how I could feel a similar theme / continuity from the first track to the second.
I also really enjoyed how you took away elements in your arrangement inbetween more intense sections (e.g. 0:50 in Rune Guardian). It made those subsequent sections more impactful.
My constructive criticism would be to add more "expression" automation to things like sustained brass and string parts (e.g. 0:50 of Mind Me) to add movement to the held note.
Overall, I really enjoyed listening!