I really like this game. I originally watched Vinesauce Joel's video on it, and, while the video was very funny to me, the only way a stream of a game can be funny is if the game gives them something to work off of. I then played the game myself, and I enjoyed it every step of the way.
However, I do think that this game can be improved. For starters, I think that just the fact that it's only one story is very limiting. Maybe something you could do is have a randomizing story, where after every drawing and the event that would take place, there would be a randomly selected next event. I do understand that would take some time, but I think if you take your time, you can make something really good. Not saying that the current build of the game is good, but parts can be added to increase it's quality.