Super slick and stylish entry. Very well put-together, although the layout is not optimized for printing.
Bold presentation, lots of user-friendly layout choices (e.g. the Pilot Traits table being right there when you first read about it in character creation). The fonts, design, and narrative all gel together very cohesively. The narrative (and it’s two endings) is compact and rich.
Would have preferred good and bad traits being two tables, each pilot having one of each.
The dice notation is explained, but it’s not clear to me what the X(Y) notation is. Am I missing something?
All in all, great work!