Hi Sev, Simon here,
I think the concept you have is very interesting, I hope you are doing okay! One game that you could look into for more inspiration is "GRIS". I recently played it, and I think 'grief' is also a big theme there.
I liked the music and art a lot! However the bugs make the game a bit unhandy to play.
A few bugs I found:
- After looking into the mirror, it turns pink
- After reading the diary, I got stuck in the bed/couldn't move. After seeing the pictures, I still could not move. But then when I look at the medications, I can move again. Is that meant?
- When I move backwards (using the "S" key), I go up (towards the ceiling) as well.
- Is it meant that I can move through walls? Because I am a ghost?
- The QR codes on your business card didn't seem to work for me, I had to scroll through your Twitter posts to find the link to your itch.io (maybe a link in Twitter bio would be nice?)
Alright, that's all, good luck with further development!