I don't know how you're banging out these games so fast, but each one is getting better and better! Dialogue is greatly improved, multiple choice endings and a dark storyline to boot!
I was expecting to be housesitting for a demon that had possessed grandmother, but I guess that's in the pipeline ;)
There was some initial confusion when we jumped to the hospital, as I thought 'the player' had put the wife in the hospital, but after a while the pieces started to come together. I think there could be some improvement with the pacing on this one - it seems to jump around a bit and leave the player feeling a little taken aback by all the info funnelling through, think of pregnant beats and pauses like you get in TV shows and films - but overall a nice experience.