Very solid. The spirit of your music is quite palpable - which is what I always like to hear. It sounds to me like you're really composing from your heart more than just trying to write something for a competition, especially with the first track.
Constructive feedback:
I would focus more on the dynamics of the instruments/mix. Some of it got a little midi-ish.
Composing wise, it has that sound of music that was composed in a midi editor. I don't know why, but it always has a sound and I can hear it with my own work when I write music that way. My method of breaking out of this was just to improvise, and improvise and improvise. If you get some sort of midi controller, it'll really help with this. Instead of scoring stuff out, you can instead just record to a metronome. It'll then have more human dynamics and timing, and velocity. And, you can write much faster.
I really liked the vibe you had though, so I hope my feedback helps you realize that spirit more fully. It is already a very strong entry. :)