Fun game, I like the premise, I just hope that in the future the English will be revised from the earlier game and later on (I'm not too far in so I don't know if its improved). The typing out of sound effects during H-Scenes is a little odd to me as I've never seen it done before but it's not exactly a bad thing, just unusual. Last thing I'd say is that I like how confident the MC is, not often you see actually competent MCs in a lot of these kinds of games. Nice change of pace for once.
Other than that keep up the good work!