really nice writing! looking at your project page, i really expected you to go a different way with your tracks. however, when i took a listen, i was pleasantly surprised. your tracks are super playful and manage to tell the story at the same time. (if you've seen any of my ratings, you know i'm obsessed with seeing how people's music and storyline correlate, and you've done an incredibly creative job at this!!!)
great job! keep it up!