Beautiful harmonic progression, each chord evokes a different feeling: initially it seems melancholic, the second chord strengthens the sadness, then there's a seventh (or ninth) that lightens it, and the fourth chord gives a sense of hope. This pattern repeats and is also reflected in the various themes within the piece. From a narrative perspective, it might have been more impactful if you had developed each moment with a different track. However, the movements with the strings are very well done, especially when combined with the flutes at the end; I might have experimented a bit more with the percussion in the middle section. That said, it's a good submission, and best of luck with the contest!