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Minor typo/tense in a conversation with Liza: "I seemed to have caught a beautiful" should be "I seem to have caught..."

In a scene with Adriana, "her head bended backwards" should be "her head bent backwards".

In a conversation with Bella and Liza, "Have you though about doing other volunteer work", "though" should be "thought".

In a scene with Rachel, "agonizingly slow" should be "agonizingly slowly".

Conversation with Susan, "hear a word from you to" should be "hear a word from you two".

Conversation with Sasha, "put all that hate beside" should be "put all that hate aside".

Sorry for the flood of corrections.  In a scene alone in your room, "When you're nearly undress" should be "When you're nearly undressed".

Conversation with Bella, "Iris and Riley won't joining us?" is missing the word "be".

Scene with a person who is probably arbitrary depending on a choice, "let her slip of your" should be "let her slip off your".

Scene with Alina (but probably can change): "watch Alina cleans herself up" should either be "watch Alina clean herself up" or "watch as Alina cleans herself up".

Conversation with Liza, "camps where they learn you" should be "camps where they teach you".

Scene with Susan, "Susan grip on you" should be "Susan's grip on you".

Conversation with Riley, "Why don't come here then" should be "Why don't you come here then".

Scene with Riley, "Excerting just the right" should be "Exerting just the right".

Conversation with Riley, "eating at me every since" should be "eating at me ever since".

Conversation with Riley, "burning in her eyes" doesn't match the plural "them" so should be "burning in their eyes".   However, I'm not sure how this line might change based on your choices.

Conversation with Liza, "treating me to as massage" should be "treating me to a massage".

During a black screen transition, "As your heading downstairs" should be "As you're heading downstairs".