Inside my world - the keys/synth is very warm and cozy while the brass is fun and quirky. It was a great idea to have sections with and without brass because there is nice contrast!
Inside phantazia - cool sound choices. Dreamlike yes, but more nostalgic than ominous to me. The banjo sound in particular has a rustic charm to it.
Inside my guilt - creative use of rhythm here, kind of alternating between a swing in 4 feel to a straight 3 feel.
Inside my fear - love this track! The pad sound combined with the echo effects are beautiful - particularly love the vibes. The crackle is peak ambience. I was waiting for this track to explode into a breakbeat - could work for an alternate version with a synth lead maybe?
Inside my bravery - really nice open harmony in the pads! And interesting pitch drifting. This track goes on for a while without much change - I personally wouldn’t mind shorter tracks, especially since we know that most game music is meant to be looped!
Inside my innocence - beautiful instrumentation and groove especially in that slightly dissonant gamelan(?) sound.
Inside my comfort - great emotional melodic writing! It would be cool to have a contrasting section where everything shrinks down to a solo instrument, maybe piano playing the melody over arpeggiated chords?
Inside my heart - really beautiful way to close out the soundtrack. Nice extensions in the string harmonies. There’s a wonderful tension between the primal percussion and the sophisticated strings. This would be so beautiful with a solo violin melody on top! This is tied with Inside my innocence as my favorites!
Overall: I love the journey you’re taking us on - the game you are writing for definitely feels like an emotional one. And you captured the 2000s sound very well - I’m reminded of Pseudoregalia in some of these tracks and Undertale in others, and it sounds very cohesive! This is already a fantastic soundtrack - some contrasting harmony in B sections with melodies would push it over the top for me. But considering you did this in 24 hours, I have no real complaints. Awesome work!