This is a cool take on the theme, nice job !
I enjoyed the overall atmosphere and mood, and clearly the artistic direction is awesome. But, fair warning, I did not finished the entire game, and skipped some bits, because the level design felt sometimes unfair and a bit too complex, especially when you don't have a lot of checkpoints. I would've love something a bit simpler and easier to go through, so I would've enjoyed more some of your cool ideas. That would be the only black spot in my opinion.
Anyway, congrats on completing the jam with such a cool submission. :)