Anyways, after reading it. I think the system is def cool! But it desperately needs a read over, theres a lot of typos and i think just misused (or maybe older?) terms used in the pdf that make it confusing to read. Like how it says superficial damage sometimes when it said fatigue another time.
I also don't know how finished you intended to make it? Because the Nerve Fighting Style path is missing a lot of stuff compared to the other two (Probably best to just not put it in the pdf at all until its finished maybe?) Super solid ideas all around though! I'll probably play it once the system is cleaned up a bit, also maybe some examples on techniques would be helpful, and how u would use them in tactical combat so players and gms have smth to go off of ideas wise.
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Thanks a lot with your reading! I worked about six months and in this next few months I'll have much less time to work on it, so I tried to get the pdf to the most playable form possible. As for updates, I have about ~15 abilities and Techniques for all Fight Styles ready! I just didn't have time to playtest it appropriately and see how it feels during play.
More examples is something I really need to put in, I think in the next week I'll be able to update with a lot of things I've been writing for it. Again, thank you for taking your time and reading with such attention.