I’ve just tried the 0.3 version, and I got a couple things of feedback.
1. Art style is great! Much needed improvement in my opinion.
2. English translation is a little incorrect / weird grammatically, maybe find a Native English speaker to rewrite a couple lines?
3. I do feel a little mislead. I thought this would be a proper “game”, but it’s really just a visual novel that has a few choices that don’t affect the story. I was hoping to see some proper like “leveling up mechanics to grow, but it just isn’t like that :(