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Found a few inconsistencies:
Despite me having had a hook-up Date with this guy on Findr before the Meet-up with Friends to one of their birthdays, the MC answers, that he's a virgin in the Bottle-Game as "truth", even though he definitely isn't anymore at the time!

Another logical inconsistency is the asking for names when they're (at least the Family Names are) clearly depicted on the Velcro-strips on the soldier's uniforms...

Also: putting the ring on that was taken out of the bird droppings without cleaning it? - EEEEEEEWWWW!

If you can fix these little logical mistakes, I'd love it - but they break immersion for me, since I see them and the Characters in the game do not ... and my brain doesn't like to dumb down ;-) - even when horny.

It can still be polite, or routine, to ask for someone's name, even if on a badge. It's not unheard of for people to have the wrong name badge or patch, although obviously the expectation for accuracy is different for military name badges over civilian name badges (where sometimes people swap, for fun, or just wear whichever one is available, if they're not allowed to take them home, or choose not to), or just to ask to call people out in a good or bad way.

You might want a first name, too.

It's not socially inconsistent, anyway.

You do seem to be conflating, to an extent, logical inconsistencies with social or personal preference inconsistencies. Something can be logical but socially inappropriate, or illogical yet something some/all people do.

Well, you still only explained the naming part, which I can accept - but the other mentioned inconsistencies still stand and are illogical and disturb immersion, i.m.h.o.

Despite me having had sex with the Findr-Date, the MC states he's a virgin when choosing "truth" in the bottle game - and not to speak of the Farm-Boy putting a bird-poop-dirtied ring on his finger...I thought people knew better than to believe the BS about "training one's immune system" with bacteria delusions by now (which this would propagate if it was the reasoning to not clean it first)...often correlating with toxic masculinity convictions, too.

When I was in the Military here in my country, I came home in Uniform and the MC also states that to his bestie in the messages on his phone - that she's looking forward to seeing him in it!

So, thanks for helping me find a few more inconsistencies in your argument - I hope this can help make things a little better - because that's why I'm posting this criticism - not to shit on a Game, that has really great potential otherwise.

But not realizing these details makes it feel as if it's just made for superficial minds who just want to bust a quick nut and don't care about immersion into the Story...if that's the goal of the entire project, then you might as well consider it achieved I guess.

And just ignore my attempts to make it good for the neuro-diverse community, who loves to match up the Details - even in an Erotic VN!

You're welcome