I honestly think the story could have been finished if there weren't so many excessive life paths , seems too ambitious. He could have done a more kinetic novel with what we all want.. mindless smut with a good story. With the ability to say yes or no to a scene instead of so many different paths. Like My New Family.
https://killahseven.itch.io/my-new-famil if you dont like in*cest, you probably won't like it