Thank you so much for your kind words! It’s wonderful to hear that you found the rhythm of the story more comfortable and easy to follow.
We appreciate your feedback about the reviving part. The plan is to give more details later in the story, even more than in the previous version ;-)
I'm passionate about this story and can’t wait to share more with you. Stay tuned for more intriguing twists and turns, and thank you for your continued support (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡