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Achmad, I like the art in this game!  But I think the writing/structure needs a lot of help.  Your story should feel interactive, but in this case all the branches just lead to instanta death - there's no real choices for the player.  Your characters also have a very samey feel.  I think you would really benefit from finding a collaborator who can focus on the writing.  Just my suggestion - any game is obviously a labor of love and it's clear you're working hard!

Thank you for the feedback! I’m aware of the issues with the writing and structure, as I'm still new to this. But I’ll definitely work on improving the interactivity in the next update. Thanks for your comment—I'll make sure to fix this!

I've updated the game based on your suggestions, making it more interactive. I would love to hear your thoughts on the improvements. Thank you so much!