Wild!
I love it. It took me places.
I think the big thing I wanted was for the end to actually come together into cohesion. Although, I did describe the theme of the jam as being low-key and trying to push the boundaries.
Though, part of why I did that is that you find little pieces of gold when you do that, and I think you did find that gold. If it all came together where it was cohesive at the end, I think it would actually be this stunning, moving piece, like life coming back together after a period of darkness.
The music itself already felt like that.
Bravo!