Slight spoilers, I guess. An extremely minor pick at one scene that bothers me nonetheless, Theo's route, after Theo and Artemis leave to collect plywood to board up the broken window, Leo meets Ollie on the stairs. Ollie wonders what all the excitement is about. Leo says "Morning, Ollie. Did nobody tell you yet?" and then he explains about the broken window and tree branch. However, no one had a chance to tell him anything. At this point, only Leo, Theo, and Artemis knew about the window. Leo and Artemis were together until the other two left to get the repair materials, so Artemis couldn't have texted him about it, and Theo wasn't gone long enough, or at the right timing, to tell Ollie anything. Ollie says he "just saw Theo and Artemis head out." so they didn't talk before leaving, either.
I'd put this on this discord but I'm not a patreon supporter, so I'll just hope y'all see it here.
...I feel silly making this comment, but it's something I'd want someone to point out to me, if the positions were reversed.