Oof I like this one. All I can really say is that it was a great action packed one. The dialogue was great, and felt natural and flowing, plus you had some great lines of prose in there.
Speaking of lines, I love the ones that just hit hard, and none hit harder than: " A horrific beauty left in its wake, a statue of earth and steel." Far out, what a line. Metaphors like that really tell the reader what's happening, both in the literal sense and in how the characters are feeling at this time. Fantastic!