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Great! I love the characterisation, between the two characters. The fact he had trouble with 'postulated' made him more human and relatable.  Usually I would ask for dialogue tags, but you're able to illustrate easy enough who was speaking, so well done with that! Really cool way to tell a story, almost entirely through the dialogue, and you can even see the scene playing out without the use of descriptors.