Well I don't know if it's worth making another video since your playthrough is already pretty cool to watch as it is but right after the music box part when the hammer-sound starts there is something chasing you. You can also die in that part x)
Just today I changed it a little bit and added a small cool detail to the ending sequence. Nothing too crazy but it's cool I think.
Maybe it will be worth a new video in the future when I add some more stuff though :)
Definitely keep going. I understand that some people just want to make funny videos while playing these kind of games and this is okay but I actually like it that you didn't do this. You just dive into the atmosphere and maintain and support it with your style of commentary which is really enjoyable.