nice retro game, and also the double jump effects are really well done.
hope you can rate and comment on my game. I am 12 years old so all feedback is welcomed.
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Did well with your comment. If you need a clear-cut structure, try:
Complimenting and highlighting the good parts. Then get into the issues, what was finnicky and where you were stuck or annoyed. Finnaly a conclusion. just briefly skim over the highlight and lowlights.
Make sure to be clear and concise