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I am a sucker for the pixelated graphics. Reminds me of DS games of my youth. The carpet making is unfortunately poorly explained within the game. Having the top of the description say that together with Pavius we will learn to make carpets made me expect to be able to learn from the grandpa in the game. So I spend more time trying to figure it out then usual. The further explanation in the description could also be more clear. It is generally advisable to start with what your goal is, so further explanations can be understood in how that allows the player to achieve the goal. Further to prevent confusion, the descriptions could be clearer. Right now I'm asked to press E to enter, where it only shakes, instead of communicating that I need to pick up a carpet. One small thing, after beating my first minigame, a performance panel appeared. I wish you good luck with any further endeavours!

Thank you very much for such a detailed comment! :D Very helpful, I see how every point you make is valid and we should keep it in mind for our next projects! ;) And ofc, thanks for playing!