Damn... I felt like a brick wall hit me at the speed of sound...
Love story a bit rushed, but hey, sometime it just clicks and that's it!
I can seriously imagine my hands, slow but steady, tightening around Lawrence's neck... I got he was sleazy, but that sonavabitch went above and beyond in being a complete bastard...
Not a fan of Rou and Theodore splitting... Because man, making himself a shield to save Theodore's life, ending with him turned into a blank slate, with no memory of anything, just earned Rou a place in that romantic corner of my heart dedicated to characters that say I love you without saying it...
As for Jaime... He's a bit of a logical, working machine that leaves no room for emotions to thrive. Had he given into them maybe he didn't end up in the harbour...
David is a head in the clouds, goofy and but limited (so far).
Monti is very sweet and I'd like to see him thrive.
This said... I'm craving more... Great story, amazing characters (although I still want to break Lawrence's neck) and suspense enough to get us itching for more.
Great work!!!