It was very intriguing from start to finish. I truly believe that the background is a work of art and should be studied by future designers for how charming and eye-catching it truly is. However, I do believe that you should build upon your lore quite a bit, it leaves much to be desired. Like a 5-star restaurant that only sells appetizers. Nevertheless, I am intrigued to see what you put out next.
-Lorelius Hogglefart