As it's a long game (especially for a non-native), I waited until the weekend to play it. In the end, the story was interesting and the environment dynamic, so the time passed much quicker than I thought it would. I'm glad I met Orion and Leo.
However, I do have one regret, which is that there was too much overlap between the text and the visuals. You're artistically talented, it's a shame not to let the visuals speak for themselves. For example, when a character smiles or blushes, the sprite illustrates it very well, so why write it? The same goes for the backgrounds. This is a very personal opinion, but I think the experience would be enhanced by relying more on your illustrations.