After your very kind comment on my submission I of course could not not not not not not check out your game ;) I love interesting characters and in this short game you managed to give these characters a lot of personality. I enjoyed the writing, which made it easy to immerse myself in the game. It felt like an episode in a longer series of events. The art is super lovely and I love the multiple expressive drawings for the characters. I love the music, especially the theme song. Shame that the levels don't unlock correctly, but doesn't really matter for a game jam game as you can unlock them like you described.
Overall I think this is a well executed concept that I thoroughly enjoyed, it felt immersive and that's one of the characteristics that I look for in a game.