It’s been about two years, yeah? You’ve progressed wonderfully! The story changes is really good and I enjoyed your new demo - Reminded me of NBC Hannibal (I watched it for the first time at the beginning of the year) so it’s good new food on the same stream for my brain.
Can’t wait to see more of the re-write! I’m still working on mine, takes a lot of work lol. Twine is especially difficult at times so I wish you the best in your progress - I don’t doubt it’ll be wonderful as always!