This was a really nice little game!
I don't have a single bad thing to say. Even the parts I disliked (all the horrible ways Olivia ends up getting offed) are there for a good reason, and are handled well.
I played all the way to the epilogue, and really loved it. This is such a nice little self contained story that subverts expectations in a neat way.
PS: Turns out that (at least in the web version) you never changed the selected option when cancelling out of dialogue options, so it always chooses the 2nd option. From messing with RPGMaker myself, I know this is because the default choices it loads in are Yes and No, and sets it to select option 2 (No) when you cancel the menu.
I definitely plan to check out your other stuff some day!