Good stuff but a lot of things need some adjustment, the story is fine and the routes are amazing but the mc feels like not main character at all like I have to say he is kinda weak in most routes. I know he is smol boi and can be trained and all that to easily complete a route or change it but hell the dude need some good push like maybe need some strong emotion to his expression or some way to make him look mostly reliable to show some progress, and he only show a reliable moment in few storyline and then he suddenly become unreliable in other storyline. Tbh it need more choice that actually make him more dominant than submissive polite sex errand boi that actually strong. Also its really unbalanced of how the mc act like he was good mc and a moment later he is in denial of being reliable and then just let the other side character shine brighter than him. Level, skill, and any grind are mostly wasted good opportunity to shape his character lore. Cmon, he need some badass artwork! Not important character even more badass artwork than the mc.
Move on, Im gonna say the gameplay is really full of illusions like at first I thought it was some rpg turn based combat or card but actually no. Then I thought this game was like dating sim with some telltale games indicator of "character trust you more" but actually semi linear multiple routes. Bro it took me 40 saves of each "crucial moment choices" but actually those choices doesnt matter at all but some unimportant choices are really necessary😑. It really need some strong message or some indicator that will say "Yo these choices are really important, THINK CAREFULLY!" Im getting so much mixed signal moment. I know handholding players with multiple endings like this not exciting to play but man it just sometimes confusing. Also my mind was like horny overdosed goldfish to remember all these hardcoded keywords and symbols to get good ending, I have to say its really cruel for an erotic game.
Then last one the art, tbh overall art is very good and rewarding but it just really need some amplifier like more explosive yknow. For example explosive cum, faster animation setting, better angles in some sex scenes with more visible genitals. You guys nailed the expression but it just need good exaggeration in some sex scenes to make it more way rewarding for the wanted ending especially to express how needy they are in intercourse.
In conclusion, good story, good lore, actually likeable character. The world is fine but some element really out of place for a fantasy setting. Very aware npc that make it more alive. Need some more fixing to avoid softlock and need written unmarked quest. Anyway, very good 👍