i had so much fun reading this!! It really reminded me of this other VN called Fueled by Wolves and that one was absolutely hilarious! Only difference was that it was a one-off April Fool's VN but this one isn't! You are way too hard on yourself, dev. While you may not realize it you honestly have mastered on how to break the 4th wall in a way that is actually funny and not just "oh look fourth wall break lol"
Even this itch page is hilarious and I laughed harder than I should have at "Chris, am I weirdo?" and all the okies ^-^
There are so many serious FVNs out there right now but another as funny as this one is rare. I look forward to dating more furry boys since I can't even get a human one to like me irl :/ Good luck, yeen dev! :)