as i said on the other post you made, im not worried about Rin, and it's YOUR STORY to tell ( i can do capilizations too ^_^ ) I';m just looking forward to what's next. just keep doing what you are doing. there are always people who will have a negative view on what you do. one thing i've learned early on with reading unfinished stories ( and there's a lot of em in the AVN world ) is that assumptions are dangerous. so i won't assume anything anymore and just enjoy the story.
keep doing what you do. ( but do it faster /s )