I keep backing your Kickstarters because I want to see what you’ll do next and I think it’s important to support other women creators, but holy moly, you guys need an editor. Your concepts are so different and creative, but the dialogue is full of odd syntax - as if English isn’t your first language. I know I’m gonna get put on blast for saying something negative, but if you need an editor, let me know. I’m a professional writer and artist (and a woman living one state over from you guys), and have begun developing my own games. I just wrapped a project, so I have some free time.