Hey sorry if there is a better place for feedback than here. The only bug I saw going through the game as it is now, was illa's name being on the diaglog (as if she was speaking, with the pink text for her name) just before it cuts from Blake (it is still just her in the room) to Illa before she enters Blake's room at her stronghold. Specifically, the text (for help locating) is:
"(It's kind of warm in here.)"
Don't let this make you think I think the game is bad! It's natural for some small stuff to fall through the cracks, especially if you are doing it yourself and aren't able to look at it from a fresh perspective! Was a fun playthrough, though I don't have much experience in this genre yet. Thank you for the great work so far and my best wishes for your continuing game dev journey in this game and in general!