Great art, pretty much why I picked up this game. Props to the artist and the voice actors. I'm sure they did their best with the material given. Do wish there would be more art in general as dialogue scenes tend to drag on without much happening. Writing to me feels like it was written by someone who has not been in a relationship. I find the lack of foreplay especially offputting.
Hey, there! We were a bit low on budget at the time of release, which is why there weren't really fully-rendered scenes outside of the NSFW sequences.
You are correct in saying that the writer (that would be me) has never been in a relationship. This does, unfortunately, lead to some occasional inaccuracies in my writing, which aren't likely to be resolved for some time.
I do hope to rectify both the lack of non-NSFW art and the lack of foreplay in the sequel, which we plan to start working on some time this year.
All that said, I hope you enjoyed Benefitship for what it was!