I did mess around with aging characters like tamara and vanessa(after I posted V 0.1), but I couldn't really get them to look a way I would be satisfied with. I came up with an idea that will address this in the next chapter, can't give any details to it yet, but hopefully readers will enjoy it.
As for the inconsistencies of height and positioning. I am currently fixing those.
For the character proportions I can't really promise on changing that, since I would need to adjust said character for every render their in. for example I changed Juliet's sleeves(They looked like she was wearing cones) on her shirt from the party and that took me hours. I can try out your suggestion for the makeup and glasses for Lilly in future chapters.
As long as people are respectful with their critiques and input, I don't reading it no matter how long or short it is. Thanks for reading